The Official Writing Challenge
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06/19/06
Clever idea for a story; I hope you expand it some day.
06/20/06
I like the way you portrayed the futility of the world's abundance. Think it might have been better to finish with the demons, rather than the angels.
A good story showing the futility of being overwhelmed by success. I think the end reminds the reader of hope, a necessary adjunct to faith.