The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/06
Very cute, creative and clever! A fun read. I really enjoyed this. You certainly covered the essential ingredients for abundance. "From His abundance each were fully fed..." Great job!
06/15/06
Ha ha! Absolutely delightful! The rhyme scheme, the Mother Goose names, the trip down "Writer's Challenge Memory Lane? Exquisitely clever, and a hoot to boot!

06/17/06
Excellent! Your title was spot on and I loved all the alliteration scattered among the verses.
06/17/06
How funny and full of life! Now you need to write a book about each of the characters from Allegorica!
06/18/06
Yes! Delightful in every way! I too especially enjoy the clever alliteration you've used all the way through this perfectly pleasing poem! :)
06/20/06
This is really a treat! Love how you used all the topics from the past few weeks and wrapped them neatly with clear meanings. Abundantly delightful in every way!
06/20/06
Wonderful... I loved the walk back down the last nine weeks. Colourful, visual.
06/20/06
This so made me smile,absolutely beautiful,funny and thought provoking at the same time.
06/20/06
another very strong piece, Jan. I liked the rythm, most the words choices, and the message. Very good! You'll do well!
06/21/06
Fun, fun, fun, fun, fun!

I bet you had fun writing this too.
06/21/06
The last line on each verse made me think of hymns :)and I loved the names of your characters. Clever work.
06/21/06
Good job. I really enjoyed this piece. thanks
06/21/06
Excellent---so creative!
06/22/06
Congratulations, Jan! You sure gave the Master a great run for his money. I'll be the scores were different by something like .001!
06/22/06
I couldn't comment last night due to being continually disconnected from the internet. It's always a pleasure reading your stories. Congrats on your win!

Trina<><
06/22/06
Jan, congratulations on your EC Win! This was my favorite this week! I am so happy you won!
06/22/06
I've decided to go against the flow.

I hate this. I can't believe you won-AGAIN. it's no fair. Who are you paying off? TELL ME! Fine. No brownies for you. (wink)

Love ya Jan. Proud of you!!! Should I air mail the brownies?