The Official Writing Challenge
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You amaze me! This is my favorite story you've written. I loved the vision I got of Paul being a writer. What a wodnerful picture! written perfectly, message was great. There was humor, clarity, strong, strong piece. This (I think and hope) will be a winner!
I agree! This engaging piece fairly sings with authenticity. What a marvelous use of skillful and humorous dialogue-- meditation on the Word! I vote this a winner!
06/16/06
Loved it. I imagined Paul trying to get out the tremendous message inside him, yet struggling keep it down to 750 words. He would not have enjoyed FW Writers Challenge, nor would his scribe. But I enjoyed your take on it. A DAVEY Fav for sure!
This is so fun! Good job!
What a great use of scripture and imagination! I had never really thought about the process Paul must have gone through in his writings. I think you captured it! Great job!
06/19/06
This is FANTASTIC.
06/19/06
This is incredible! Paul came alive as he struggled for words to describe the Indescribable One! Well, well done! :) I'm going back to read it again! I love it!
06/19/06
Great characterization of Paul. I could easily imagine him doing exactly what you have described. A very clever take on the subject. Good job.
06/21/06
Brilliant ... wonderful ... fantastic ... wow!

This is one of my favourite Bible passages and you've MORE than done it justice.

Did I mention that I really like it?
06/21/06
I echo everything above. I love the way you captured Paul's personality.
06/21/06
Interesting, creative, entertaining are just a few ways that I could describe this piece. Then there's cute, unique, actually very unique. I loved it! Very well done.
Differently unique!

Trina<><
I've never heard Paul captured this way, but you probably caught the real man. Good job.
06/24/06
Loved the way you characterised Paul as such an energetic and passionate man of huge intellect. Interesting way to exegete a passage of scripture.
06/26/06
I just came back to this to send it to a friend because I love it SO much. Again - well done. I was totally surprised it didn't place ... must have been just a whisker away!