The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/06
A super entry! You began and ended with a bang, and in between you pulled off some moving illustrations of anger, desperation, and God-trapped flailing. Father wins ... and be careful what you pray for! Well done!
06/15/06
Strong beginning and end with a nice progression in the middle that makes the reader wonder what's going to happen next. What a life-changing experience something like this would be.
06/16/06
I can identify with this.
"God is with ME!" Wow!
good story!
06/19/06
Very good story, encouraging and strong.
06/21/06
What a great message. I like the way you used spelling to emphasize the messages she was sending herself e.g. f-a-i-l-u-r-e. That was really effective.
06/21/06
Very powerful!