The Official Writing Challenge
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This was great! Absolutely hysterical, with an excellent message cunningly weaved in.
Thanks for sharing, and God bless,

This is a fantastic story, heartwarming with the perfect combination of humor, and best of all the message was allowed to shine bright.
I found this to be a little confusing, but figured it out near the end and then much enjoyed it.
Some great descriptions. I think it needs a bit more clarity between the presnet and the flashback. Well done :)
Yep. I got a little confused too. But this story was well worth reading. Nice characters and lots o love displayed a real unique way. I'd like to be like your dad gathering friends with one hand and holding a radio to Heaven in the other. I'm going to remember that line! A real winner, after a little editing.
I think there's potential for a really first class piece here. I agree it needs some editing, both for spelling/ punctuation and to make it a little easier to follow. But be encouraged, not discouraged, the characters and characterisation is superb and the dialogue excellent.