The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/06
"I am the joy of planting
Standing right before you
How would I have been a forest
Had you not planted?"
Creative and brilliant, really love the message of abundance woven throughout.
06/15/06
Mavelous. A free verse poem that flows well, and gives a good message. Good job!
06/17/06
Great message here. For me, it would work better as a prose piece. I loved the last stanza, though.