The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/06
This probably happens daily in offices around the world. Just as the Word says-in the last days men will do what THEY think is right (paraphrased), all the time wondering why they don't have peace or most likely not even aware that its missing. I believe this is written well, very contemporary and timely. No suggestions from me. :o)
06/08/06
This was great because right at the end you caused me to miss a breath - exactly what good writing should do.
06/10/06
A very cleverly constructed, well-written piece. Well done.
06/10/06
Timely message. Well written with captivating dialogue that kept my attention throughout. Nicely done!
06/12/06
Yeah, truth hurts. Well done.