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06/09/06
Interesting account of what might have been going through Peter's head. I'd like to see this extended somehow to the present day, to our own search for peace and our own tendencies to poke fingers in Christ.
Good job overall.
God bless
Al
06/09/06
Great take on Thomas from the inside. I enjoyed this very much.
06/10/06
Interesting account from Thomas' viewpoint. I enjoyed this piece.
06/12/06
I don't think I've ever read anything from Thomas's POV before--you did a great job getting into his head, and examining his motives. I'm not sure about the uncapitalized and unpunctuated "glory" towards the end...but I really like that you "fleshed out" a Bible person who's usually thought of as pretty one-dimensional. I like this a lot!
06/13/06
I love how you wove so many doubts through the story so Thomas would live up to his modern-day nickname. Great job!
06/14/06
You did a really good job bringing Thomas to life. I liked it very much.
06/15/06
Congratulations, Brenda! It's beautifully conceived and developed. I love fresh slants on the gospels!! Well-deserved win!