The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/06
This is a point worth pursuing in prose. "The blood which the contracting parties exchange "creates a psychic communion of the two parties." (B. Vawter, Word & Mystery, Newman, 1969)

Through contact with the same life principle they become a single soul."

This is the deepest and most mysterious part of your piece. Done right it would drawn sinner and saint.

06/13/06
I agree - some really profound thoughts here. Thank you for sharing them.
06/15/06
Deep thoughts brought on by a life of study I'm sure. Thanks for sharing this.