The Official Writing Challenge
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Even though the topic of your story is about a dying man, your writing about it leaves this reader with a feeling of peace. Thank you!
Very nice--I really felt as if I knew Thurman by the end of the story. And I was amused by the prayer predicament of your narrator. The only thing that puzzled me were the last two sentences of your first paragraph, which led me to expect Thurman to be a very different sort of person than he turned out to be. Really compelling writing and great characterization.
A lovely tribute to this man and a great story.
A lovely kind rememberance. Thank you for sharing.
Wonderful story, told very effectively! My heart is warmed right down to its toes.

George, this was great.