The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/06
A touching tribute to a father. I especially liked this line: We exuded strength, but had soft-as-Jell-O insides."

Good descriptions and very heartfelt. Great job!
06/12/06
Interesting and it draws me to my own memories. I liked some of the sentences, but wished the writer would have gone a little deeper. Didnt really understand the tractor lesson. I would have started the story off with the wonderful line about dancing with Daddy. There are some wonderful keys here. A little more work will bring out their power.
06/15/06
"Dancing with daddy was like floating on a cloud, and since my feet never touched the floor, I danced with grace and perfection." This brought a smile to my heart. My granddaughters love for me to pick them up and dance with them. Thank you for this story.