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"God’s never tired of working miracles as long as I believe. And I believe."
This was hard to read, not because it wasn't well written, but because the writer's faith is so strong. I see death, but you see The Word and His promise. The Word is always true and His promises are always "Yea, and Amen!" So, I must change my view. I can't change The Word. Thanks for the lesson.

What a powerful message. This is well written and very believable. Thanks.
Beautiful story of trusting God in the midst of the fire. You had me at the foot of the bed watching and hoping. I might suggest line spacing between the lines of dialog to make it easier for the reader. But that is a small thing compared to the warmth and beauty of this piece. Well done.