The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/06
"God’s never tired of working miracles as long as I believe. And I believe."
This was hard to read, not because it wasn't well written, but because the writer's faith is so strong. I see death, but you see The Word and His promise. The Word is always true and His promises are always "Yea, and Amen!" So, I must change my view. I can't change The Word. Thanks for the lesson.

What a powerful message. This is well written and very believable. Thanks.
06/15/06
Beautiful story of trusting God in the midst of the fire. You had me at the foot of the bed watching and hoping. I might suggest line spacing between the lines of dialog to make it easier for the reader. But that is a small thing compared to the warmth and beauty of this piece. Well done.