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06/08/06
I enjoyed reading your article and will use it as a personal meditation.
06/08/06
Very good, very wise. Well done.
06/09/06
Beautiful piece. I really enjoyed it. Great job.
06/12/06
Sounds like a sermon that we need to hear more of these days. Nicely done.
06/12/06
I like your play on words here: "well" as both adjective and noun. This is a gorgeous hymn that I fear will be forgotten soon.

My only suggestion is that the first part seems a bit adjective-heavy. You can trim the weight some by choosing wonderful nouns and verbs, and minimizing adjectives.

Loved the sermon!
06/12/06
One of my favorite hymns. Great Job!
06/12/06
Lovely piece, with a great message.
I felt some of the sentences, particularly towards the beginning, were a little unwieldy.
Nonetheless, I enjoyed this a lot.
06/13/06
Well done. I love this devotional. It really gives one food for thought and for the spirit too. Thanks
06/14/06
Jan, I love the depth of this piece! And you made me feel I was right there in the congregation. Just a note to watch overuse of adverbs(those pesky critters).
Beautiful and from the heart of God!