The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/06
well told.
This is a great story with very descriptive language. Watch word usage: gail should be gale, brang should be brought and ware should be wear.
06/09/06
A sweet and peaceful story; I see it all in my mind like a movie. You write well and I like reading this.
06/09/06
Good visual writing. Nice job!
Sweet story with great discriptions :-)
06/13/06
Nice and peaceful.Nothing like family peace.
06/13/06
How lovely! I like the idea that even in this distant future, families are treasured.
06/14/06
This is such a sweet story! I love the romance that you weave into your pieces. Great work!
This is a good story. I enjoyed the futuristic approach.