The Official Writing Challenge
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As Christians we are weird--set apart for God. Good job!
06/02/06
Fantastic! Love the title, great ending!
06/02/06
Tie in a scripture and I think this becomes a wonderful devotional!
06/02/06
Oh, I loved this. Every bit of it. This was perfectly written, and such a wonderful message.

Thank you thank you thank you, excellent job!
06/04/06
Wonderful, and inspiring. For me it spoke to the fact that what He thinks of us is the only thing that matters and when we accept that we are ok no matter what others think. It changes our focus from us to Him. Thanks for the reminder. It is all about Him
06/04/06
I love the bits about prying their skin free, and badly scripted monologues...really great imagery.

I wonder if you should have stayed in 1st person for the whole thing? That would have avoided the "our tongue...our hands", which reads a bit awkwardly.

But most of all, I love this because I, too, am wired differently, and have felt like this almost all my life. You could have been writing my story, and you did it beautifully.
06/05/06
"I wanted them to see it, even if I could not"

Good insight... and the truth. Well written.
Great message. I relate too. Thanks!
This is very good. So many of us can relate to it. Thank you.
06/07/06
You have some lovely descriptions. One of my favourites was: "...alone even in a horde of humanity, and empty."