The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/06
Wow--definitely a unique look at "purpose!" Oh, to have the grace of Sam and his wife!

I did note a few places where you needed possessive apostrophes--my only nitpick.

A well-written story of what a difference God can make in the face of tragedy.
06/04/06
This story was suspenseful and kept my attention to the end. The only things that disturbed the flow for me was one or two sentences that seemed (again, maybe just me) a little too long.

I liked the characters you chose to interact with your MC. I didn't understand at first that the borrowed blazer was some kind of security or elevator man uniform, a disguise by which he could carry out his plan unnoticed. Very good story!
06/07/06
Phew - what a relief to get to that ending! Great writing.