The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/06
Your descriptions, so vivid, transported me there by your side. The ending brought tears to my eyes. Good job.
Kate~
06/02/06
A very honorable salute to fallen heros. We will carry on the promise they died for.
Very moving.
06/04/06
Oh, my...how incredibly touching. Thank you for the honor you gave our heros. My brother-in-law just recently returned form Iraq and I read this piece with my hand on my throat, trying not to cry until the end. He came home safely but lost 9 in his group. Thank you again, Deb