The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/06
This story I would change from poetry to prose. I think it would work much better that way. You have some fine elements, some real gems, but in my opinion the gem needs a new setting.
I love the dream. Sounds exactly how gentle and loving Christ would come to us to heal our past. This really could be an excellent short story. Think about it. Keep writing. Stefanie
The imagery of the reassembled rose was very effective! What a wonderful testimony of God's grace.
This brought a tear to my eye. I have a freind who's been through something similar, and a rose (albeit a glass one) became a symbol of her healing.
Thank you so much.

God bless,

Kevin