The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/06
Encouragement to anyone who has had an abortion. But I was a bit confused by: “And You believe her words?” the accuser screamed. “No,” the Son of God answered. “I know her heart.” The No seemed like it should have been "Yes, and I also know her heart." (Just me, I think.) Very well written.
wow! someone has talent! incredibly written. was really awestruck concerning the polish of this piece. very impacting, beautiful and will probably score every high. great work!
06/05/06
Very powerful and great interplay between heaven and earth. Excellent in construction and pace. You've done very well here and you'll score high. Good work!
06/05/06
This is one of my favorites this week--you did the "changes of scene" beautifully. Awesome.
06/05/06
Well done! You paint a realistic picture of the anguish this young woman is experiencing as well as the unseen battle the defeated foe tries to mount.
Wow, and wow.
Ok, my two favorite lines...
"Silence!" thundered the Father. "She speaks."
and...
“No,” the Son of God answered. “I know her heart.”

This is a powerful story. Thank you for sharing.

God bless,

Kevin
06/06/06
Teary-eyed I send my compliments to you. Good work.
06/07/06
Beautifully written.

I was slightly confused about whether the pills were meant to cause the abortion and whether she took them or not in the end. But from the comments, I gathter that nobody else is confused, so I guess that is just me.

Well done.