The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/06
I love the verse you built on... one of my favorites. I liked the message and you really crafted this well. Goo work.
06/05/06
Oh, how I wish I could write free-verse poetry like this! It just trips along, and such beautiful words and images. Truly wonderful!
06/06/06
You brilliantly used the cloak to help weave this masterfully done poem. What a talent for free verse you have. Well done. :) Jo
06/06/06
Good imagery and flow to a conclusion. God Bless.
06/07/06
I love the analogy of the reversible cloak! And the way you express yourself is beautiful. Well done!