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You held my attention all the way through and hit me with your powerful message at the end. Your leaving the question of Gordie's salvation unanswered is very effective.
Brilliant dialogue here! You made the experience come alive, sad as it was. I'll email you some personal observations...Yes, it IS powerful the way it ends disappointingly. May God use your mighty pen to move us to care. Who is my neighbor? Bless you, dear sis!
Realistic dialogue and unfolding of events. Having lost several friends and family members to cancer in the last few years, I know the resilience and stubbornness that they have. Very good writing.
How sad to age with disease! You brought that point home and the hope that the hopeless have. Good work.