The Official Writing Challenge
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You've given us some really terrific mental images here. A few metaphors may have been a little over-the-top, but the effect as a whole was one of experienced story telling. Always find your own voice and go with it! Great job!
I enjoyed this. See you in the winners circle 1706
You had me agreeing with this character, laughing with him and then you made me get serious about finishing the race. Great read
Very well done. I liked the image of the hiding in the portable toilet debating whether or not to finish. Very realistic. And I liked the end with the Ironman encouraging the runner to finish ahead of him. Great image!