The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/06
I like this one! Very good! :-)
06/02/06
"My kids don’t retire. The race goes on. But you can’t beat my retirement plan!"

Great line! Love this story!
06/02/06
Now, that was cute! Good writing and very purposeful message. :) Thanks for the reminder that our purpose doesn't always need to meet the requirements of worldly eyes, but needs only meet with God's approval. :)
06/03/06
I enjoyed your story. Well done.
06/04/06
This is a devotional disguised as a story! Cool!

One small thing: principal instead of principle. Memory device: the princiPAL is your PAL.

You really are an encourager, it shows all over your writing.
06/05/06
Great message. Well written. Captured the doubts and fears. Good job!
I could relate to so many areas of this woman. Good message. Great job.
06/07/06
Spot on with the topic. This is something that many people will identify with, I'm sure.