The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent! Your beautifully-crafted poem kicks humanism in the teeth. Sooo satisfying to read and ponder. God bless your mighty pen!
06/06/06
I love the way this flows, and it's message is so clear and very compact. As I always qualify my comments on poetry - I'm no expert; but I certainly am an expert on what I like, and I liked this very much. Nice job.
06/06/06
Enjoyed the gentle flow, the last verse was my favorite. Great job!!