The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/06
I love this story, and you told it so well!
06/02/06
I have read that dogs can smell cancer. Nice read and great title!
06/04/06
This story was so well told. You brought me along perfectly, and kept the key hidden until just the right moment to reveal what you were leading up to. Great job!
06/04/06
I loved this, like a mystery. So very good.
06/04/06
Oh, I loved this! My dogs are like my children... I can just imagine one of them doing this. I loved the way you portrayed the dog's thinking. And I learned something new about them. Didn't know that they could detect cancer. Great writing! Kate~
06/04/06
I liked the way you occasionally let us peek into the dog's POV. Very effective.
Very well told story. I liked a lot. Good job.
All I can say is "awwwww." This was just fun to read.
Thank you, and God bless,

Kevin
06/05/06
Good dog. Very cute story. Nice way to unfold the mystery.
This was wonderful. You went between POV's very smoothly. And what an ending. Great job.