The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/06
thinking,wondering, considering, pondering whether to read this poem again. It has a rythm like dropping, pinging, dripping, falling rain. Yes, I will read it again, and again.
Good read!
06/01/06
I strongly agree with, David. This deserves reading again and again!
06/04/06
This is absolutely stunning. I wish I was judging this week--I'd give it 5's across the board. What more can I say? Just...perfection.
06/04/06
most excellent. I really liked this. You had good word use, great message, captivating meter. A few places I had to re-read a line to get back in rythm but that was probably my stumble, not the writing. You'll do well here.
06/04/06
I missed some commas. But since I knew how it was supposed to go, it was hard for me to remember to put them.
06/04/06
Very good. Good rythm, good message ... I enjoyed it very much.
06/04/06
Very creative use of word and rhythm. Great message! Very well done.
06/05/06
Not only brilliant, but one of the most satisfying reads I've had here.

If the editors don't publish this, "I'll be a blue-nosed gopher!" (to quote Pat Brady from the Roy Rogers show).
06/05/06
Absolutely love the rhythm and the message! Amazing!
06/06/06
Amazing. Your rythem, word choices, and message were profound. I loved it.
06/08/06
Sue, I guess this week I'll have to be that digging rhodent with the funny-looking nose...No matter what, this piece is a BIG WINNER on the 'Sherry Awards' list! Keep on!
06/08/06
Hee Hee, for every blue-nosed gopher there's a very grateful writer.
06/09/06
Wow that was cool! a very unique use of words :)
06/14/06
Outstanding! Such strong and fierce word pictures. My heart pounded quicker with each line. Great job!
04/04/07
I've read this one before, - loved it again. Great rhythm, and the last line makes me gasp.
04/04/07
Sue,this is just beautiful in every way! I don't think I've read any poetry you've written before. I'm glad I followed your link!
04/04/07
Best of the Best!! Master writing! Thanks for the blessing!
04/05/07
Wow! This is a truly wonderful poem.