The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/06
This was good! I really enjoyed it. Very moving. Kate~
06/01/06
Heart touching. Well written!
06/04/06
Well written and extremely moving. I love how you made it feel as though the life they had been living since the death of their son was a bad dream and when they wake up from this particular sleep it signifies them actually wakening for real. Nice touch throughout.
06/05/06
A good job of tugging at the heart strings. Very nice.