The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/06
I couldn't imagine where to begin trying to describe what it would be like to be with Jesus. This is indescibable joy.

I liked the short choppy sentences and the use of song words.
If we yet 'see through a glass darkly,' I'd like to thank Him for using your pen to provide such a breathlessly awesome peek in advance! My inner being quivers with anticipation. You've pulled off a sign and a wonder, in my book!
05/27/06
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05/28/06
Brilliant ... just brilliant.

I like the way you make the main character struggle to put things into earthly terms. I also like the way that you haven't tried to explain that joy in terms of time and place and individuality.

This is a winner in my book!
05/30/06
Brilliant!
05/30/06
Testing only
05/30/06
Testing only: 2
05/30/06
Testing only: 3
05/31/06
This was wonderful. What a struggle is is to capture the emotions we migt feel when that time comes...but I think you expressed it as well as one might. :) Great job!
The expected wonder got through. Great job. I loved it. It makes me long to be in his presence.
05/31/06
Testing 4
Congratulations, Brenda! You passed the "testing (1,2,3,4)!" I'm so glad this was recognized as the gem it is!