The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/06
Would like to see this continue, see how the journal is notated on the good and bad days.

I enjoyed this story! It would be a wonderful story to share with children, especially those with similar struggles in their lives. Nice job!
05/31/06
This would make a great opening for juvenile book by expanding on Jenny's feeling on the way home etc. Expanding on the making pizza and discussion while and then incorporating Jenny's Joy Journal into the entire piece with up times and down times (as was suggested)I can see it being a very relevant piece of writing.