The Official Writing Challenge
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This is cute, but it took me a few read throughs to get everything completely. Because it is an office memo explaining a marketing strategy it is a bit boring. But you should get high marks for creativity. Very original and well written.
05/26/06
I'm still trying to figure out the title. I thought we were talking about pepto bismol.
Very creative and fun.
05/26/06
So that's how it all happened! I always wondered. Great creativity.
05/28/06
It's well written, but I think I'm missing some background knowledge. 'Joy' is a soap dish? Pink stuff? Perhaps it is a brand name that we don't have in China? Well written for all that, anyhow.
I thought this was extremely creative and you wrote with a very unique style which I really liked.
05/29/06
I really liked this, especially your comments on "Exuberant" and "Luminous." The general population needs a word-a-day vocabulary lesson! This is written with gentle wit and great skill.
I loved it. Your take on joy was so creative here.