The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/05
Excellent story ... outstanding visuals and dialogue. Very talented writer. This really tugged at the ol' heart strings. Good job!
03/01/05
What a perfect entry for this topic. Great writing, carrying the mood throughout.
(plus, I was adopted so I especially like it.)
03/04/05
Very nicely written.
Giving a child up is so hard and your character her was written with a loving hand. You gave her the grace she needed and let the reader in on all much a mother loves her child to let her go. Also, the doubting in her heart that may last a lifetime...