The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/06
Ditto. Love it!
Exquisite! How beautifully you set up for the fulfillment of Anna's longing! "Is this the day You intervene
And blow the veil away?"--Wow!
05/27/06
This is a gift. It ministers not just for then, but for us...this day! An anointed and beautiful poem.
05/27/06
Written by an anointed hand! Powerful!
05/27/06
Absolutely wonderful!
05/28/06
Just perfect in every way!
05/28/06
This is beautiful on so many levels--I read it as a prayer from a contempory woman, then when I saw the Scripture, there was a wonderful aha! moment. It works--and beautifully--both ways. Bravo!
Excellent. Beautifully written.
05/29/06
Oh, I do so love good poetry, and this rings like a bell! My favorite lines, the years carving their lines on me and eyes that see what was and what will be, are exquisite. And it is so reader friendly, I can imagine a parent reading this to a child, and the child getting the message. Another addition to my "favorites!" Thank you.
Breathtaking! Definately a Masterpiece written by a Master.
05/29/06
Oh, wow! I read this as a contemporary prayer as well, and then had to re-read it after the scripture reference. Amazing work. Simply amazing!
Oh, yes, Mel, this is absolutely beautiful in every way! Perfect!