The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
The grasp of joy dipicted is strong. It certainly gives the reader food for thought. "Emotion welled in the boy’s throat and he choked on a sob. In Cassimer’s eyes, he was beautiful. He was a treasure." Great job!
05/28/06
This sounds like it is going to be a great novel.
05/29/06
In Texas vernacular..."dang" that was good! Please finish!
Kate~
05/30/06
I'm already viewing the movie version in my mind. Your writing is poetry in prose, just the right word to both paint the scene and move the story along. Thank you.
ooooohhhh! I'm buyin' the book! Great stuff!