The Official Writing Challenge
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This work has a perfect blend of depth and poetry - the intended message is easily understood and appreciated. Well done!
A thot provoking piece that makes you stop and inspect the flower blossoming.
Lovely, lovely! This beautiful, sensitive poem has a mantle of the miraculous on it. The kind of piece I long to write, but must leave to those truly and naturally gifted as poets. Excellent work!
Masterfully written. You are a true wordsmith. With few words you have painted a masterpiece in my head. Good job!
Lovely masterpiece!
I really loved "...What desperate love would keep her there?"

You have such a marvelous gift.
Purity, you have nothing to worry about. You are a gifted wordsmith and a breath of fresh air.
I'm astounded… as ever.