The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
Needs to be more here. Just because he accepted Christ he got his money and his family back? What happened?
There is much in this arresting account that could be developed. Make it sing by 'showing' the readers a picture of what's happening, rather than 'telling' or interpreting for the reader. Keep writing! You have excellent things to say. It's worth the discipline and hard work to make it shine!