The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/06
Fascinating. I was thrown of by "horrified that Frank’s demise" when it was Freddy who died but this was very well written.
05/26/06
"Frank's demise" through me off too, and I wasn't really sure who Jack was and where he came from either, but I like the story. I think it's cute.
Love your title, and the reasoning of the young intecessor here. Wisdom beyond her years. You did a great job of hooking me into the story through poor Freddie's unfortunate event. Fun to read! Thanks!