The Official Writing Challenge
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Absolutely loved the ending. Never thought of it that way before. I think what we have here is another win!

God bless!
Trina
what a wonderful poem. Such gems within this piece. Beatiful job!
I so appreciate the flow, the poetry, the lesson! Wonderful job.
05/26/06
I feel like I should be able to sing this one. Very nice.
05/26/06
Delightful story of a journey - and it wasn't the journey that was important, it was the destiny! I liked the rhythm - it sounded like train travel to a holiday destination
05/27/06
Oh, I love this description of joy. The ending is perfect. Great job!
05/27/06
Great content and form - well done!
05/29/06
Wonderful message, good flow and pace and an enjoyable read.
05/29/06
Oh boy, could I ever relate to this, having taken up countless "toys" and hobbies. Your charming poem had just the right ending.
05/29/06
nicely done
Now that was a poem I could relate to, It was great.