The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/06
I like the humor in this piece, but it could have used some more proof-reading. There were quite a few typos in it and mispelled words... other than that, I found it very entertaining! :)
05/26/06
Wonderful creativity.
I like it! I like it! You're a free spirit and my kinda people. Go for it!
05/29/06
I liked the little ride down memory lane that the song lyrics took me on... twas fun!
And painted a very vivid picture of what joy is "not".
In the end you described beautifully, what joy is.
Good job! Kate~
05/30/06
I loved the style of this! It was cute and real and just fun to read!
I was singing right along with you! This was so fun. Thanks!