The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
need to seperate your stanzas here. The image was good, but I got little lost without spacing giving me thot reference points.
05/25/06
I really enjoyed this look at joy. Like David said, spacing would have made for easier reading. Your writing reveals a heart for God.
05/26/06
I have always loved the wedding imagery in the Bible. Very nice poem. I agree - more white space would make it even better.