The Official Writing Challenge
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What a great tale...with a great ending. Loved the way you named the town Prosperity and how he never returns.
wow. What a creative story. Great job writing this one.
WOW! Hit right between the eyes by a dead man's fist. Excellent writing.
Woo hoo! Awesome, and the last sentence is a wowser! I love it!
Very good. Great story, great ending ... I enjoyed the read.
I join the others in praising this inspiring story. It was beautifully written.
Gripping tale, poignant message, well-chosen words. But I'm confused about the narration of the tale: who's being addressed here, and where are they? Other than that, I found this fascinating and well-written.
Oooo, spooky! Excellent tale with a painful twist to it! Love d the last line. Well done!
Great Read, love the ending. Master quality all the way!
WOW!!! I'm speechless. This is powerful. What a story. What and ending. It was all great. Thanks.
well written, great movement and nice storyline. This was polished. My nit picks ... the word use didn't quite match "poor" narrator status. Also, I have trouble with dead narrators. My little quirk. Aside from that the lesson is great and the writing superb!
Greed and the love of money cashes in another poor soul! Wonderful story! Great writing and enticement here. Loved it!
Top-notch writing! I agree, this is polished writing that deserves placing high.
Plot, description, moral - all superb!
Terrific piece! Congrats!
Just wanted to congratulate you on your win. Again great job Ann. I've added you to my favorites.

God Bless,
Ann, you left a heavy pounding where my heart used to be! Up to your usual snuff, for sure...Congratulations!