The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! Absolutely fascinating! And a most unique way to describe our topic of Prosperity. Loved it from word one! Intrigued me, kept me interested and thanks for sharing.
Excellent writing. This one held my interest right to the last period. Good job.
Wow! C.S. Lewis meets BibleMan...I love it. Creative, great description, characterization, action and irony. I predict a winner.

I really enjoyed your imagery. You created a believable demon. Good job.
Wow, this is exceptionally clever...a very unique approach to the "spiritual warfare" genre. I liked it immensely.
My reaction? VICTORY!!! :-) I instantly thought of the song, "Victory in Jesus"! Nicely done. I personally think you could have ended w/ this: "Once more, the creature was sent reeling..."