The Official Writing Challenge
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I struggled with the meter which seemed to change(?) (proabably just me - I'm poetically-challenged.)
My Favorite line: "A cross marks the spot, not the usual X".
I like it - well done.
It took a second reading for me to get the meter and 'it.' Wonderful message-all the prosperity we need are the treasures to gain in heaven, taught in His Word. Lovely!
Splendid. I liked the rhythm and flow, just one little line fell short, but it didn't take away from the beauty of the poem and the strong message it conveyed.

Beautiful! Simple, yet holds a large treasure of spiritual advice. Good job!
I love this especially because it was unique among entries--and I enjoyed its rhythm and pace. Very, very nice.
This was very good. I loved the message and enjoyed reading it.
The ending was strong. The piece was polished and I thnk the meter worked well. I can't remember which stanza, but one read a little weak. Other than that, you were spot on.
Wonderful, simple but wth a strong message.
Strong beginning and ending, especially. Liked starting off with "The world’s finest riches await you THIS DAY" - and thus inviting the reader to apply the message right now!!!