The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/06
A very sweet story AND a lot of Good Common Sense coming from Jeff. So true, and well written also. Good Job.
05/22/06
Good job with writing dialog--I really appreciate that in a short story. This was well-written--maybe just a tad predictable? Jeff's a great character, and he said just the right things.
05/24/06
What a great hubby - full of the virtues that count. :-)

A very direct hit on the topic. The reader can't miss the conflict, OR the fact that the Bible is the resolution of it.

Good job!