The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/06
Very, very Nice. I usually comment that it would be nice to have a footnote with the Scriptures referenced; however, without them, perhaps that's best...cause then we have to dust off our Bibles and look them up. Aha! But great job in rhyming with scriptured verses. Now I've got to go read them. Enjoyed this immensely.
05/22/06
Very clever! I caught one slip-up that you might want to correct: "slay" instead of "sleigh." The rhymed Scripture references reminded me of songs I used to sing in Bible School--a nice bit of nostalgia. Good job!
I liked the rhyming scripture references....first time I've ever seen that done! My favorite line: "If you think you are something youíre nothing,
This pride will bring you despair."