The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/06
I wonder if this lovely letter would be even more effective if written in prose format. Your granddaughter is blessed to have you.
Two lines jumped out:

"Prosperity is built on serving the Lord."

"Prosperity is a promise of so many scriptures in his word -
A promise God cannot break."

Soooo, prosperity is receiving from God and then responding to His love! Nice.

I agree with Jan - I think such a love letter to a grandchild might be even more powerful in a prose format...more real, perhaps.

Your granddaughter has a rich legacy!




05/24/06
I love the sentiment within these lines. Prosperity at its very best.