The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/06
This is a pleasure to read. It flows extremely well. It also makes a nice point.
05/22/06
Very sweet!
05/22/06
As someone else said, it flows well, and that is quite an accomplishment considering the language. It's easy to make short lines with simple words flow (Three Blind Mice)...much less so using a selection like yours. Nice job.

I almost "heard" this in my mind, like a country Western song...

:-)

Well composed. I'm not a poet so stand in awe of those who are!
05/24/06
sweet and refreshing, super job!
06/24/06
Good poem. I enjoyed reading it.