The Official Writing Challenge
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A very interesting story well told.
02/28/05
Great and imaginitive story most colorfully written and just a touch of mystery. Good work.
03/02/05
Saint, is that you?
03/03/05
Truly this is a tale well told and worth the telling. It is very imaginative and deserves a lot of praise.
A story within a story! Nice weaving of past and present and then neatly packaged at the end. It brought out the story teller in me and I had to keep thinking of all the ways it could have ended or all the "what ifs" it started in my head!