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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Prosperity (05/11/06)

TITLE: Manure Sale
By dub W
05/11/06


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A thousand pounds of fresh manure began to slide off the trailer and onto the street. “Dag nabit Billy, whatcha wanna go and release that hitch for?” Harold Turner stood on the sidewalk watching his nephew trying to force the unbalanced trailer hitch back onto the silver ball. “Especially, with that trailer loaded.”

“I could use a little hep.” Billy pressed his body against the steel arm. “Lord, if’n yer listen’n, send me an angel to hep, cause uncle Harold ain’t gonna.”

About the time he finished his pseudo prayer the last of the load slid off the trailer and onto the street. The balance again shifted and the steel bar slammed down upon the hitch ball. Billy locked it into place.

“Lota good it do ya now,” Harold laughed, shook his head and muttered, “a brick short.”

Billy stood and looked to the back of the trailer. A pile of smelly green fertilizer was resting in the street next to the curb.

“Get a shovel and I’ll be back an hour or so.” Harold started walking toward a corner tavern.

Billy slowly picked up a shovel from in back of the pickup. His uncle was known for practical jokes, and telling Billy to unhitch the trailer was one. Harold often took similar advantage of Billy’s slow demeanor; then Harold would slip into the nearest pub.

Billy scooped the first shovel full of manure and tossed it into the trailer. A dark Buick suddenly pulled up along side of the Billy. “Whatcha doin with that manure? You sell’n it?”

“Well we’us gonna,” Billy did not finish his sentence.

“I need a some for my wife’s roses, I gotta cardboard box in the trunk, do you think I could get a couple of shovel’s full? I’ll give you $20. Fair enough, save me drive’n clear across town to the home improvement store.” The man got out of his car and produced the box which Billy quickly filled then carefully placed the box back in the trunk of the man’s car.

A lady from a house across the street walked over to the old pickup. “You got fertilizer for sale? Let me get the wheelbarrow, fresh manure is hard to come by.” Minutes later she came back pushing a plastic wheelbarrow. Billy filled it then pushed the wheelbarrow back to the lady’s house. “Here you are young man.” She stuffed a twenty dollar bill into Billy’s shirt while they were walking.

When Billy got back to the truck there were three more men with wagons and wheelbarrows waiting. As he filled one, another would arrive. In about fifteen minutes Billy had filled everyone’s request, and not a scrap of manure was left on the street.

“Listen, if you could bring another load by here on Saturday morning, I’m sure lots of folks would appreciate it,” said one of the men as he rolled his wagon away. “I’ll tell the neighbors you’ll be by.”

Billy’s pocket bulged with twenty dollar bills.

Billy walked across the street to the corner bar and saw his uncle sitting on a bar stool.
“Hey Uncle Harold,” Billy chimed.

“Boy, don’t you know they don’t allow people like you in bars. Take that truck on over to hardware store, and make sure they give you $15, then take yer truck on home, and give all thet money to yer mother. I’ll find a ride. Kin ya find the store?

“But, Uncle Harold,” Billy protested.

“Go on now scat, not another word.”

Billy ducked his head and turned toward the entrance. As he neared the door he overheard his uncle say to the bartender, “the kid ain’t right, he’s slow ya know.”

Instead of going directly to the hardware store Billy took the truck and trailer back to the farm and had another load of manure put on the bed. Then he drove to the hardware store and watched as a crew unloaded the fresh fertilizer into waiting gunny sacks.

“Here’s the $15 I told yer uncle I would pay for a load,” said the store manager. “Bring another one on Saturday.”

“Okay, I’ll be late comin’, I got something to do.”

“That’s fine. Try to get here be noon. You kin find yer way home cain’t ya boy?”

“Yes, sur.”

Billy got in the pickup and drove out of the parking lot. “Lord I didn’t see no angel and I didn’t mean to ask fer so much, and wow, ah certainly didn’t count on prosperity.”


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Kevin Kindrick05/18/06
A fine story, and a great read! Thanks for sharing a glimpse, and a laugh.

God bless,

Kevin
Marilyn Schnepp 05/18/06
The Title grabbed me, the story held me, and I'm aiming to tell ya - you're right on target, topic-wise, the piece was entertaining, had a message, and I wish I knew what Uncle Harold thought later when he found out about Prosperity? (Smile) Delightful entry. Enjoyed it.
Cassie Memmer05/19/06
What a great imagination! This was fun to read. I thoroughly enjoyed the 'underdog' coming out on top. No suggestions here, just keep up the great writing!
Joyce Sykes05/19/06
The title was a great attention grabber. Good job. Excellent story. Keep up the hard work.

Blessings
Joyce
Jan Ackerson 05/19/06
Loved it! I haven't read every entry yet, but I'm willing to bet that you're the only person who associated "prosperity" and "manure." Made my day, and the writing was delightful.
Lynda Schultz 05/19/06
You are one very creative writer! This was excellent.
Venice Kichura05/19/06
excellent dialect & action!
sounds like a chapter in a novel
Peter Thomas05/19/06
I enjoyed this. It was fun to read.
Joe Moreland05/20/06
Great story! Very amusing. I loved the impromptu prayer about sending an angel because Uncle Harold wasn't gonna help.
Dr. Sharon Schuetz05/21/06
This was a cute story. I enjoyed reading it very, very much.
Pat Guy 05/22/06
We ALWAYS love this kind of story. Kinda satisfying in an unsatisfying world. Thank you Dub!
SYLVIA KING05/22/06
Great title and story. Just like something the Lord would do. Really enjoyed it.
Theresa Kissinger05/23/06
I love manure and the lesson it teaches (and compost!) I can't believe I didn't think of a way to use it for 'prosperity'. However, I couldn't have done the justice to the subject that you have.
Wonderful story telling, I experienced it from beginning to end...(in my imaginiation it was BelAir,Maryland 1965)
Anita Neuman05/23/06
Ha ha ha! This is the first humourous Prosperity entry I've read - how refreshing! Delightful characters, charming wit, and a surprising little lesson - as always. Thanks, Dub!
Edy T Johnson 05/23/06
You dear writer! You had me chuckling before I finished reading the first sentence. This is great writing, a wonderful story, entertaining characters, it just has everything. It is going in my favorites, and I hope you get it published. God bless your writing and thanks!
Beth Muehlhausen05/23/06
Very fun!! Loved the jargon/dialogue/local slang. Clever and it is comforting to see the underdog win without even trying. :-)
Joanne Malley05/23/06
Yer one good storyteller! How do ya do dat so quickly, Dub? I guess yer jus' one good writer. :) Fun from start to finish! Jo
Jessica Schmit05/24/06
This was fabulous! I can see why so many people have left such wonderful reviews. This story is worthy of each one. he dialogue was so believable. The wording was perfect and the storyline was engaging, entertaining and wonderfully delightful. Hope to see this one win something.
Shari Armstrong 05/25/06
Classic!!
Rev. Toni Brown05/28/06
Great example that "God is able to do exceeding abundantly above all that we can ask or think!"
Tabiatha Tallent03/29/07
I loved this one. A heart warming story for sure.
Rita Garcia03/29/07
I enjoyed this on so many levels! The dialect never misses a beat, and the message is woven through an entertaining and delightful story.
Joanne Sher 03/29/07
So clever and fun. You did an amazing job with character development. Excellent! Thanks for pointing me this way.
Julie Arduini03/29/07
What a rich read this was. I loved everything about it, characters, dialect, the creativity, the ending. Great job!
Al Boyce03/30/07
Good read Dub. I loved the way Billy did an end run around his uncle with the help of a little prayer. The last shall be first...


   
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