The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful writing! I love the way you pulled out the line, "Satan wages war against them." Your description of the magnitude of the Holocaust was powerful and I love the image of the doves and clouds. Very well done.

This was well-written. Great article!
Wow, I am so glad my entry didn't come before or after this one. Your writing is astounding. Absolutly incredible. Masterful in fact!
05/12/06
Exccellent writing, so polished and smooth and powerful. Very good!
05/12/06
This is soooooo polished that I could see my reflection in the monitor! Obviously a highly skilled writer. And the message was spot on. What a telling for this likely winner!
Very powerful and poignant. Beautifully crafted, and wonderfully thought provoking.
You clearly showed the plight of the Jew. Excellent writing both in the message and in the polish.
05/15/06
This lifted my heart high to the heavens, rejoicing in each word! Wow! What a blessing! Wow! What a joy! You outdid yourself on this one! ;)
05/15/06
Awesome! You can feel the hope of the sons and daughters of Abraham in every word. Great job; has to be a winner this week!
05/17/06
Beautiful! May God grant Israel peace.
05/17/06
Ah, now I know why I didn't comment when I read this before the hinting started. It's because I struggle with separating the theology/content from the writing! Having said that, Crista, you have created a compelling article where each paragraph builds beautifully upon its predecessor, driving the reader along to the culmination. Form and function in untiy! Well done!
05/17/06
Ah, now I know why I didn't comment when I read this before the hinting started. It's because I struggle with separating the theology/content from the writing! Having said that, Crista, you have created a compelling article where each paragraph builds beautifully upon its predecessor, driving the reader along to the culmination. Form and function in untiy! Well done!
05/17/06
Ah, now I know why I didn't comment when I read this before the hinting started. It's because I struggle with separating the theology/content from the writing! Having said that, Crista, you have created a compelling article where each paragraph builds beautifully upon its predecessor, driving the reader along to the culmination. Form and function in untiy! Well done!
05/17/06
Ah, now I know why I didn't comment when I read this before the hinting started. It's because I struggle with separating the theology/content from the writing! Having said that, Crista, you have created a compelling article where each paragraph builds beautifully upon its predecessor, driving the reader along to the culmination. Form and function in untiy! Well done!
05/17/06
..... er wonder how that happened?
LOL Val, guess you had lots to say, huh?!! :-)

This gave me chills, literally, all the way through.
Thank you, thank you, thank you! This piece is built with the grace, beauty, and soaring majesty of Solomon's temple. Surely you have been to the Land of Promise? I went three times, all back in the 80's. Also sat through all nine hours of the movie "Shoah." You just can't look at a newspaper through secular glasses again. Magnificent!