The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/06
I enjoyed your entry and you have an eye catching title. However, I didn't really see the connection of the title to your article. Maybe it could have been explained a bit more? There were also a few small words missing here and there, but overall this was interesting to read. Good job.
05/13/06
One of the best 'sermon/teaching' entries on this topic that I have read so far! Very clear. This was a particularly hard topic to write to with honest integrity and you have done so with convincing passion and clarity.
05/13/06
What a strong piece on hope. Great messege. Strong writing.
05/14/06
Love the title! This is a very strong instructional piece. Thanks!
05/14/06
This was a good piece. I like the perspective you used.
05/16/06
A great take on hope. I like that you approached it from the opposite end - what hope is not. Clever writing and a good message. Thanks for elevating my hope.